Changes between Version 58 and Version 59 of WikiStart

Timestamp:

Mar 15, 2011, 11:37:15 AM (12 years ago)

Author:

Anna Tomanek

Comment:

Proof-reading of the page

WikiStart

@@ -5 +5 @@
         <p>
                 CKEditor is proud to be open source since 2003.
-                It&#39;s available under the terms of the <b>GPL</b>, <b>LGPL</b> and <b>MPL</b> 
+                It is available under the terms of the <b>GPL</b>, <b>LGPL</b> and <b>MPL</b> 
                 licenses. <a class="ext-link" href="http://ckeditor.com/license"><span class="icon">&nbsp;</span>Read more</a></p>
 </div>
 <h1 id="TheCKEditorProject">CKEditor Developers Community Site</h1>
 <p>
-        Welcome to the website of the <b>development team of CKEditor</b>. This is the place 
-        to collaborate and contribute to the development of the most popular browser based 
-        WYSIWYG editor in the world. For more generic information, please go to <a class="ext-link" href="http://ckeditor.com/"><span class="icon">&nbsp;</span>http://ckeditor.com</a>.</p>
+        Welcome to the <b>CKEditor development website</b>. This is the place 
+        to collaborate and contribute to the development of the most popular browser-based 
+        WYSIWYG editor in the world. For general information about CKEditor please refer to <a class="ext-link" href="http://ckeditor.com/"><span class="icon">&nbsp;</span>http://ckeditor.com</a>.</p>
 <p>
-        <strong>Mission</strong> &ndash; Create the best browser based WYSIWYG editor, satisfying all editing needs, being focused on 
-        <b>performance</b>, <b>accessibility</b>, <b>features</b>, <b>cutting edge technology</b> and 
+        <strong>Mission Statement</strong>: Create the best browser-based WYSIWYG editor &mdash; satisfying all editing needs, focused on 
+        <b>performance</b>, <b>accessibility</b>, <b>innovative features</b>, <b>cutting-edge technology</b>, and 
         <b>compatibility</b>.
 </p>
@@ -27 +27 @@
 
 === [wiki:Team The Team] ===
-Meet the team, passionate for editing.
+Meet the team of people who are passionate about editing.
 
 === [wiki:Plan Development Plan] ===
-What we're doing now and what's next.
+What we are doing now and what is to come next.
 
 === [http://groups.google.com/group/ckeditor-tickets Tickets Activity] ===
@@ -36 +36 @@
 
 === [http://docs.cksource.com/ Documentation] ===
-The official web site with the full documentation.
+The official documentation site for our projects.
 
-=== [http://cksource.com/forums/ Forums] ===
-Get (and give) support, socialize and exchange your ideas with our community.
+=== [http://cksource.com/forums/ Community Forums] ===
+Get (and give) support, socialize, and exchange your ideas with our community.
 
 === [http://ckeditor.com/download Downloads] ===
-The public distribution releases of CKEditor, from it's official website.
+Public distribution releases of CKEditor.
 
 }}}
@@ -52 +52 @@
 
 === [wiki:Contribute How To Contribute] ===
-Being a developer or not, step in and become part of it now!
+No matter if you are a developer or not, step in and become a part of it now!
 
 === [/register Register Now] ===
-Register at this site to open tickets or add comments on tickets. Then [/login login].
+Register at this site to open tickets or add comments to existing issues. Then [/login login].
 
 === [wiki:Bugs Reporting Issues] ===
-Let us know about every single issue you may find in CKEditor.
+Let us know about every single issue you find in CKEditor.
 
 === [wiki:TicketLifeCycle Ticket Life Cycle] ===
-Illustrates the tickets handling workflow.
+Description of the tickets handling workflow.
 
 }}}
@@ -71 +71 @@
 
 === [wiki:Important Important Considerations] ===
-Things you must have in mind before you start coding.
+Things you must keep in mind before you start coding.
 
 === [wiki:SVN SVN] ===
-The place where the CKEditor development line happens.
+The place where CKEditor development occurs.
 
 === [http://docs.cksource.com/FCKeditor_3.x/Design_and_Architecture/Browsers_Compatibility Compatibility] ===